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T.I.H.P by *KKADUKEN:iconKKADUKEN:

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Submitted: April 6, 2006
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This is a picture of another character that I've been working on. He's part of a rather intriguing story, and I can't wait to show you guys the sequential stuff soon.
Deviant Critiques are more than welcome as usual!!!
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~valenior:iconvalenior: Apr 6, 2006, 4:18:35 AM
wow, a lot of things coming out(or in) of that boy, like the pose and the movement of hte pic, great job, i dont have critiques for this excellent job ^^

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~kadenfukuyama:iconkadenfukuyama: Apr 6, 2006, 5:38:57 AM
that is really great so far. I like the hand coming out of him particularly. It draws my attention really quickly. I think the action and the expression in this pic are excellent. The only thing I see slightly off is the white space up top compared to the detail at the bottom. But thats just small potatos. Great work!

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=questingraven:iconquestingraven: Apr 6, 2006, 6:12:05 AM
Nice line work and perspective on the character :)

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*KKADUKEN:iconKKADUKEN: Apr 6, 2006, 9:19:12 AM
Your right about that white space at the top, I should do more with it, I always have a habit of leaving space for possible "WORD BUBBLES" for comics. I've really got to get over that! Thanks for the crit!
*lastscionz:iconlastscionz: Apr 7, 2006, 1:29:25 PM
ok, i aint so good @ giving critiques. but here goes

my main concern is towards his anatomy.

his left-arm's length... seems to be quite short, creatign a tangent between his fingers and his leg

also some proportion issues. furthest arm could be smaller, and closer arm could be bigger, along w/ the length of his arm [as mentioned b4]

i like the attempt of the perspective use, but i think the layout could've been played w/ more to give it greater impact.

like i myself wouldn't of cropped the creature off there. i wouldn't shown more of it, but that's jst me..

ahh that's all i can think of now... sorry, i'm really not so good at giving critiques..

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*KKADUKEN:iconKKADUKEN: Apr 7, 2006, 1:48:13 PM
layouts are were I think I could use the most work and most of the other stuff to. Agree alot with the fact that not much planning goes in to these drawings, and I feel that a bit more thought about the drawing first will go a long way. Thanks Chamba!

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Your philipino? I know some tagalog! PUTONG INA MO!!!! I dont know if thats how its spelled and it in no way refers to you, but hey...I know some!

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*lastscionz:iconlastscionz: Apr 7, 2006, 1:50:58 PM
yeh, i think maybe doing thumbs work... but thene again.. i should take up my own suggestion of doing thumbs.. haha

andyes.. i understood whatchu mean [that tagalog term]... dunno if it's spelt like that either.. haha

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how weird is this... I can understand, read and sing in Tagalog, BUT i can't speak it very well..... it just doesn't make any sense..

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~leela4fry:iconleela4fry: Apr 19, 2006, 10:39:11 PM
so this is for the comic????? how's that going? btw, you're work sucks. ;-D
~Wasaby:iconWasaby: Oct 11, 2006, 10:22:17 AM
Oh man, i love u, it's wonderfull:love:
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